Feedback - Miss Spencer

You have added an extra piece of analysis since my last feedback, and this piece is more detailed than the last two. You discussed the elements in DISTINCT more obviously, and mentioned conventions at points. You also added a variety of screen shots from the film (however these were not always relevant to the points you were making e.g. you showed her playing with the knives but didn't mention this important part of the mise en Scene)

Your previous work has not been improved yet, you really need to address the points in my first feedback and then reply to the post letting me know what you have done. I am beginning to become a little concerned that you are falling behind in your work Antonia, please come and talk to me if you are struggling to keep up.

• All work is on a 2/3 border, and in order to improve you should:
• Embed the film in EACH post
• Add many more screen shots throughout your analysis
• Remind yourself of the DISTINCT work we did, and apply this to all of your analysis
• Get the prelim task and evaluation blogged.
• Ensure all images are jpegs, as many of your images are not showing up. Please come and talk to me so that we can go through this as it is very important.